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Articles: Poetry | | తడి ఆరని చెమట | |
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entO spUrti tO Srii Srii gaari kavitalani gurutu chEstunnaayi mii kavitalu. maarpu ikkaNNunchi modalayinaa bhaavishyatkaalam himsalu lEni sabhyasamaajam nirmaaNamautundi....
SubhaakaaMxalatO....
Posted by: Mrs. sujatha Thimmana At: 18, Feb 2010 11:33:55 AM IST
chAlA bAguMdaMDI mI kavita. ekkupeTTi vadilina bANaMlA uMdi. eMtO maMdiki tappakuMDA tagulutuMdi mI bANaM. 100 ki okaLLanainA mArustuMdi.
Posted by: Bullibasu Bullibasu At: 18, Feb 2010 11:01:40 AM IST
Jhon Reddy garu,
I agree with you, and accept your suggestion.
Thank you very much for your concern.
Posted by: Dr. Raghotham Reddy Pinninti At: 18, Feb 2010 1:37:05 AM IST
nice thought. nice poetry. But in couple of stanzas the same bhaavam repeated. So may be if you could concise some stanzas make it small then it will be very nice.
Posted by: jhon Reddygaru At: 17, Feb 2010 11:55:39 PM IST
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