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| kavitvamlO vaachaalata, saagatItalu samaanaardhakaalu kaavani telsu. anaalOchitamgaa alaa raasEsaanamtE. pOsT chEsina araxaNamlO gamanimchaa naa kaamemT tappani. evaru paTTimchukumTaarlE ani Urukunnaa :) . naa tappu teliyachEsina vaariki kRutajNjatalu.....
Posted by: Mr. Krishna At: 30, Sep 2006 1:06:28 AM IST
Very informative subbu, Thanx
Posted by: Malakpet Rowdy At: 28, Sep 2006 3:51:23 PM IST
subbu, nEnu kooDaa mee kaameMTutO Ekeebhavistaanu. modaTi koddi lain`lalO kavitaku seTap tayaaru chEsukunnaTTuMdi. kathalOnO, vyaasaMlOnO aitE ivannee parvaalEdu. kavitvaaniki ivannee eMduku? anavasaramaina viSEshaNaalu, varNanalatO niMDi unnaayi modaTi paMktulu.
alaagE mugiMpu kuuDaa nuvvu cheppiMdi sababugaanE uMdi. ee dRuSyaanni choosi ilaagE anubhooti cheMdaMDi ani annaTTuMdi. paaThakuDiki iMTar`preTEshan`lO svEchCha ivvaDaM mukhyaM
Posted by: Mr. nihaar nihar At: 28, Sep 2006 1:34:37 PM IST
andarikee dhanyavaadaalu..
kaamESvara raavu gaarU namastE! kriyalni takkuva vaaDitE vachanaM paalu takkuvautundani cheppalEM. aitE appuDappuDu kriyalu tolaginchaDaM valla kavitaki andaM vastundi.. udaaharaNaki..
cheekaTi samudrapu lOtullO
paatipeTTabaDina sUryuDu
mellagaa paikostunnaaDu
anE kanTE
cheekaTi samudrapu lOtullO
paatipeTTabaDina sUryuDu
mella mellagaa..
pai paiki..
anaDaM valla kavitaki andaM vastundi. okkO chOTa kriyalu vaaDitEnE andaMgaa unTundi. ekkaDa vaaDaali ekkaDa teeseyyaali annadi kavitani baTTi kavE nirNayinchukOvaali.
ika 'rOjU chUsE dRuSyaM' kavita gurinchi. geetaanjalini anuvadistU chalaM anTaaDu. goppa kaLa pradhaana lakshaNaM chadivE paaThakuDi sthaayini baTTi entO konta anubhUtini migalchaDaM ani . aa kavitalO kavayitri oka dRuSyaanni chUsaaru. aa dRuSyaanni chUsindi chUsinaTTu vyaktaparachi, 'aa lEmitanamEmiTO telisindi' ani vadilEstE, paaThakuDu tana sthaayini baTTi, anubhUti chendutaaDu. meeku parOpakaaraM kanipinchindi. naaku kavitvaaniki sarihaddulu lEvu, (ekkaDO panDu tini ikkaDa ginjalu naaTE piTTa, ekkaDekkaDivaarikO falaalnandinchE cheTTu) anna vishayaM gOcharinchavachchu. ee sandarbhaMlO kavitvaM sahajasiddhaMgaa raavaali ani cheppaDaM avasaramaa anipinchindi. tolaginchina modaTi kavitalO bhaavaanni inkO kavitalO ekkaDainaa vaaDukOvachchu kUDaa. adee kaaka 'ennaaLLugaanO naalO chippillE bhaavOdvEgapu dhaaranu eDaari paalu chEsi tapistunTaanu' anaDaMlO oka manchi ettugaDatO kavita praaraMbhamautundi. ivannee chUstE mundu KanDika valla kavitaki mElu kanTE haanE ekkuva jarigindEmO ani naa abhipraayaM. meerEmanTaaru?
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 28, Sep 2006 9:29:04 AM IST
Subbu, its really nice to see such good articles that help new poets in learning. Do continue this.
vAchAlata, vachanatwaM prasakti vachchiMdi kAbaTTi nAkunna konni saMdEhAlani tIrchukunE prayatnaM chEstAnu. kukkapilla kavitalO vAchAlata kannA nAku vachanatwaM ekkuva kanapaDiMdi. udAharaNaki 'nAku chAlA jAlEstuMdi' anaDaM kannA 'nAku chAlA jAli' aMTE aMdulO takkuva vachanaM uMdani anukuMTunnAnu. raiTEnA? vachanatwaM taggiMchi rAstE adi ilA uMTuMdEmO:(Subbu, sorry to take the liberty of re-writing your poem)
mA eduriMTi kukkapillani chUstE
nAku chAlA jAli
kottavALLevarannA dAniki chirAku
pichchigA goMtuchiMchuku arustuMdi
machchika chEsukuMTE
doMganainA sarE
tOkUputU nAkEstuMdi
geliliyO, kOparnikasla mIdakUDA
modaTlO
prapaMchamilAgE arichiMdaTa!
kAnI pAtavALLa guriMchina prastAvana - asalu kavitalOnainA, nA mArpuchEsina kavitalOnainA - avasaramA annadi kAsta saMdEhaMgA uMdi.
ika 'rOjUchUsE dRuSyamE' kavita guriMchi konni saMdEhAlu. I vyAsaMlO cheppinaTlu, 'lEnitanamEmiTO arthamayyETTu chUpiMdi' taruvAta paMktulalO vAchAlata unnadi, anumAnaMlEdu. A paMktulalO, kavitwAniki uMDAlsina lakshaNAlugA reMDu cheppAru kavayitri. okaTi sahajAti sahajamaina bhAvadhAra, reMDu tyAgaM. kiTikIlO chUsina dRuSyaMlO, tyAgaM (tyAgaM kannA parOpakAraM saraina padamanukuMTAnu) tappa sahajAtisahajamaina bhAvadhAra nAku kanipiMchalEdu. adi kavita modaTipErAlOnE ekkuvagA kanipiMchiMdi. aMchEta A pErA tIsEstE aspashTata ErpaDutuMdEmO?
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Rao Bh At: 27, Sep 2006 10:54:18 PM IST
Also, thanks so much for sharing so many important/interesting aspects of poetry with us!!
Posted by: Nishigandha At: 27, Sep 2006 8:13:22 PM IST
okappuDu nEnu 'vAchAlata' anTE kavitvamlO vachanam kalavaDam ani anukunEdAnni :) chAlA manchi aarTikal subbU.. naakaitE eppuDU sandEhamE, ekkaDa aapAlO! :((
Posted by: Nishigandha At: 27, Sep 2006 8:12:09 PM IST
'vaachaalata ' anE Term mIda asamtRupti umdi naaku. saagatIta amTE saripOtumdEmO. chaalaa mamchi vyaasam.
mI vyaasaala samkalanam oka pustakamgaa veluvaDaalani kOrika. adi outsaahika kavulaku emtO upayOgamgaa
umTumdi....
Posted by: Mr. Krishna At: 27, Sep 2006 7:17:43 PM IST
ekkaDaitE cheppadalchukunna bhaavaM cheppaDaM aipOtundO (migataa antaa mundu cheppina bhaavaaniki vivaraNE ayinappuDu) akkaDa aapaali..
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 27, Sep 2006 6:02:12 PM IST
ekkaDa aapaali annadi raasEvaaLLu elaa telusukOvaali ? E geeta daaTitE vaachaalata annadaanni elaa nirNayinchukOvaali ?
Posted by: Ms. Sowmya V.B. At: 27, Sep 2006 5:55:37 PM IST
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