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| Manchi padala perpu..vidi vidiga anni padaalu grandhikame. Kanee annee kalisaka, aa padala andam koddiga chedindemo...
Udaharanaki,
ambara neelambaramuna...vajra kanthulalo...
ee reyinella divamu chese Sashi mayookha kanthulu..
(ambara neelambaramuna -- aakasana neelakasana..)
kaalamella vechi choosi..chakoramula ooradimpu lo..
..kanee(?) ee reyinella divamu chese Sashi mayookha kanthulu..
kalayika kala ika ani viriyani kaluvalaku odarpulo..
.. ee reyinella divamu chese Sashi mayookha kanthulu..
(idee marii vibhinnam ga undi..chandruku ratri ni, pagalu chesthe, kaluvalu muduchukuntai kaniee vichhukovu..Kuvalayaanandakarudu - Chandrudu..)
ilaa prathi sentence ni aa ' ee reyinella divamu chese Sashi mayookha kanthulu..' sentence tho kalipi chadivithe correct ga link kudirinatlu anipinchaledu..
No hard feelings srini..All the best for next work.
Finally, sunnithamaina bhavanni, chala kathinam ga cheppinatlanipinchindi..kathinamaina padaalani kaadu naa uddesyam..bhavam - bhasha sariga kalavaledane..
~Saradhi
Posted by: Mr. Saradhi Vedula At: 9, Mar 2004 5:34:21 AM IST
mundugaa mee viluvaina samayaanni naa kavita chadavaDaaniki,mee spandanalu pampaDaaniki vechchinchinanduku andarikee naa kaimoaDpulu arpinchukunTunnanu
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raghu gaaru
mee anumaanaanni naenu avamaanamgaa bhaavinchaDamlaedu. praSamsagaa,abhimaananga aanandamgaa sweekaristunnaanu.'SaSikandarpuDu' prayoagaaniki artham meerae vivarinchaaru. ika aa prayoaga aantaryam.chandruDi kaantipunjaalu manmathuDi baaNaallaa SRungaaroadraeka praerakaalugaa rasoattaeja
bharitangaa praemaavaeSa pooritamgaa unnaayani varNinchaanu. SaSi,kandarpuDu vaervaeru vyaktulu. kaani SaSae kandarpuDu. vaaru vaervaeru kaaru anna
reetiloa SaSi kandarpuDini anukaristunnaDu(atani pani chaestunnaaDu) ani naa uddaeSyam.
Posted by: Mr. srinivas mullapudi At: 19, Feb 2004 2:49:02 PM IST
bagundi..wording but little bit complex...
Posted by: Mr. benerjee At: 18, Feb 2004 3:00:48 PM IST
Good one srinivas gaaru.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 16, Feb 2004 8:51:39 PM IST
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